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I like that approach - gives a new perspective too. This poem has that; it may be blunt in its presentation, but its certainly entertaining.
I say that because the three-three-three-one ratio of division was a good idea... gives each word a weight of its own.
... I don't know why, but this reminds me a lot of Chinese literature; its crisp, solid, but not wasted away. In most cases its true, but for the most part it highlights doubt right till the end.
Well done! Keep writing.
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